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Thread: Night on the Town 6th floor style

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    Inactive Member Fliptastic29's Avatar
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    Smiles spread like peanut butter, left to ride,
    the mood is excitement
    and the scene is a party favorite.

    Friends reunite for one last victory call,
    beers and shots are slammed down,
    gettin jiggy with it, high fives, salsa shaking youths in their prime show the world they too are important.

    The night is finished with a hand shake and a smile,
    The feeling is tired,
    the mood is exhausted,
    the night is over.

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    I like this peice.

    and the scene is a party favorite.
    Friends reunite for one last victory call,
    <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Those are my two favorite lines.

    They just kinda go "WHAM" - they just click.

    the line about being too important seemed so long to me, but I liked this one.

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